——————
Colors become light…
and light becomes day…
And soon enough the glow
is fading away…
and once again the night
shall have its pay…
and follow on the heels
of impending gray..
Should I depart
or maybe stay?
my head so worried
in full dismay…
just don’t know
what I can say…
when my soul
is this fileted…
——-
David L. Whitman….06/30/2012 from the lap of Dr. Seuss
Your filleted soul… So poignant. Again, can relate! I love, love, love your writing – so much so that I nominated you for two awards!
Awee:). Thank you so much. And congrats on your awards:)))
Anytime, gorgeous
Hahahaha! I have been on a mission to find Hop On Pop!
Here I am oh here I am! No I don’t want any spam!
You got that right! Nobody wants spam! The processed meat or the unsolicited bulk messages.
Yes!! Two for one bad:)
well-expressed:) but confusion again:)
Yes:)))). Part of life at times:). Thank you:)))
Beautiful!
Thank you Mari:)))))
oooo — this one made me uneasy/worry David… I hope you are just listening to the dark stories before bed again, which inspires your wonderful, but ‘darker’, writing piece. Feels like chaos and confusion/panic in the soul for me… reading (not unfamiliar feeling either)…. and wishing to see your soul back in it’s state of wholeness and not carved up!!
Sending hugs — and loving your image which does emit those rays of hope ~RL
Awe. This was not so bad:)))). Thank you for caring so much:))). Huge hugs to you:)))
So relieved then… soul in tact I take it
YAY ~ will check out your 2nd poem in a few just to make sure 
)) xo
Hahaha. Well let’s hope that its a good one:)))
saw the Dr. Seuss comment after and that explained the “fileted” soul. Humor may not cure everything but it sure eases the heart.
Yes…good old Dr. Seuss:)) always a favorite:)) thank you so much:)))
David, the picture is huge, also your excellent poem!
Should not be worried, it’s great to live every moment of life, the maximum intensity from dawn until dusk and enjoy all the blessings that are given to us!
I send you warm smiles and happiness, David!
Stefania, you always see so deeply…thank you for your wonderful words:)) Have a great evening:))
Poem so full of worries.. Sigh just can’y pass it without being touched.
Awe…no worries, Mateja:)))
I don’t like the thought of your soul being cut into boneless strips…..makes me very sad
but also makes me think of filet-O-fish sandwich—which stirred me to watch fish sandwich Youtube videos…. I love this photograph. I missed your photos of sun and light. And I think you should definitely stay, not depart, because the sun is bound to come up tomorrow. And I stopped myself from posting Youtubes of the sun coming up and a singing fish. 
Sam of elf land 
hahahah….Fish sandwich…filet o fish…filet o soul lol…Great job Sam:))))
I know….I’m too funny….in that quirky, gotta-laugh with my or run away fast kind of way. LOL
hahahahaha…Well..I’ll laugh with you:)
I figured that!!! Like you’d ever run from an elf princess. LOL. Glad you are smiling.
I love this one David…, beautiful poetry
Thank you so much Henriette. Its good to see you:)))
This is perfectly perfect!!
awe…thank you so much:)