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stabbing downward
with cunning viciousness….
as jagged teeth they fall…
Piercing the ground
like so many
lonely, bloody hearts…
The cold slowly seeps in…
Freezing you from the
inside…
Till the emotions you felt…
And the ones you knew
that you should feel…
Were simply…
Not available to you…
anymore…
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David L. Whitman 1/05/2013 pierced by the ice….
You move me so. You are a great poet. Thanks for sharing.
I am so glad that you like my work. Thank you so much
very powerful. well written
Thank you Padmini. This one was short but seemed appropriate
wow!!! You have a wicked sense of humor in you…I mean that as a fine compliment.
I love this poem of yours…the best.
Thank you so much Charlie:). And I’m so glad you have that inner eye
You are welcome sir.
I always enjoy your poetry, and the images that accompany.
Thank you so much, Sheila!
what a depiction in picture and words
Thank you so much. It was a place of beauty
Icy teeth woooow they sure look amazing. Stabbing, piercing that was my thought too as I looked at the photo.
Yes. I think its hard to lOok and not see teeth lol
No matter from wich angle I look icy teeth are trying to get me… Lol
Impossible to escape lol.
You’ve got really a very nice blog. Every post that i unfurl is filled with lots of colorful words playing with each other producing meanings that were never felt before.
Thank you so much. I try to look at things in a different way. Have a great day!
Lovely, David! Everything wonderful poem and picture! I love it!
Thank you for sharing!
Have a wonderful Sunday! Warm wishes. With respect and friendship, Stefania!
Thank you thank you Stefania!! Have a wonderful afternoon and many blessings to you!!!
absolutely amazing thank you for sharing David
Thank you Chris….I’m so glad you liked it!
I hope to enjoy more
Stunning photo! The poem mirrors it perfectly!
thank you so much!!!