Swept Away…

Rock springs...

——

Secret flow…

silent flow…

running high running low…

sweetest place to dip your toes….

remaining here and never go…

——

dip your knees…

in filigrees

water racing if you please…

give your legs a gentle squeeze…

to the sound of honeybees…

—–

Time so vast….

sinking fast…

memories racing of my past…

on this day my die is cast…

quiet screams that are my last…

 ….

David L. Whitman 04/21/2012 from under a sky so blue…

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24 thoughts on “Swept Away…

    • Thank you so much richard…And you’re right…You can trap yourself in a place where you literally can’t rhyme your way out….I’m so glad you liked the piece…thank you:)

  1. You’re the FIRST person to mention that…I thought it was a pretty dark poem, but no one said anything because the first two stanzas are very pleasant…glad you liked it:)))

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