setting sun
——
Days at end….
Sun is too…
Golden skies,
Here for you…
Pack your bags…
search your soul…
pluck some stars…
regain control…
do a dance…
Beneath the sun…
Make it quick…
before it runs…
cross your heart…
delighted yet…
with the moon,
under duress…
another day,
solar done…
when you weep
under the sun…
—–
David L. Whitman 04/25/2012 from under a sky so blue….
Thoughts from the Outdoors 
Another great poem 🙂 thank you David
I’m so glad you like it cynthia:)
Beautiful imagery, and a beautiful poem.
I love this 🙂
I’m so glad you enjoyed it…thank you:)
Amazing way to display the value of a sun set.
:). Thank you so much:). I love sunrises and sunsets
I definitively agree! You might like some of my work.
Thank you…I definitely will.
Great way to end the day. Thanks for your thoughts.
I’m so happy you enjoyed:) thank you
I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
Imagery pounces, lovely. Thank you..
Pounces…This wird is making me happy:)
T’s a very happy word ; )
Absolutely:)
plucking stars, very surreal 🙂 loved it!!
🙂 What? You don’t pluck stars? Joke! Thank you, Jymiely 🙂
yeah,like its near to impossible.. i just gaze on them .. how do you pluck them? 🙂 you’re early eh? good morning 🙂
Wow! Stop my heart these are breathtaking words. Love this.
I’m so glad you like it….Flowed out of me so easily…some of them are tough…this one not so much
Those tend to be the best ones.
Very true