Seeking El Sol

Tiny sun


This shiny glow…

Our closest star

and solar lover

is here to

guide us

where we want to go…

show us

what we need to know…

Take our travel

to and fro..

and lead us

where our spirit flows…

so open up…stop the fight…

whether day or blackest night…

and when the darkness presses tight…

Always there will be the light…


David L. Whitman 05/10/2012 from under a sky so blue…


18 thoughts on “Seeking El Sol

    • :))))) I just slightly edited it…for some reason i had a very repetitive rhyme…lol…Thank you sooooo much:)))))) and i love the photo too:)))

  1. How did you get the take-my-breath-away shot? I love this photo and the poem. Wonderful message that I’ve held onto my whole life. I’d like to think we each have a tiny sun within us, too, especially poets. 🙂 Sam in the sun

    • well….I came to late to get the sun over the trees, but through the trees was better:)))) yes…I do believe we have a tiny sun within us all…It’s just locating it that;s the problem

  2. this is one of the loveliest things I’ve ever read…and the picture is stunning, my favourite for both so far, just amazing David, really.

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