Tiny sun
——-
This shiny glow…
Our closest star
and solar lover
is here to
guide us
where we want to go…
show us
what we need to know…
Take our travel
to and fro..
and lead us
where our spirit flows…
so open up…stop the fight…
whether day or blackest night…
and when the darkness presses tight…
Always there will be the light…
—-
David L. Whitman 05/10/2012 from under a sky so blue…
Thoughts from the Outdoors 
Oh …this one just melts me (even with a migraine)… LOVE LOVE LOVE the photo – and feel similarly about your poem. Nothing can stop you now 🙂
:))))) I just slightly edited it…for some reason i had a very repetitive rhyme…lol…Thank you sooooo much:)))))) and i love the photo too:)))
Last 2 lines are what touches me most. Whatever darkness I’m going thru, i have faith that one day I’ll see light.
yes…important to remember…it never lasts forever:)))
This is very very pretty.
Thank you, Kim:)))))
Refreshing and very nice- “I Like it” 🙂
thank you Cindy…:) nice to write something pleasant 🙂
How did you get the take-my-breath-away shot? I love this photo and the poem. Wonderful message that I’ve held onto my whole life. I’d like to think we each have a tiny sun within us, too, especially poets. 🙂 Sam in the sun
well….I came to late to get the sun over the trees, but through the trees was better:)))) yes…I do believe we have a tiny sun within us all…It’s just locating it that;s the problem
this is one of the loveliest things I’ve ever read…and the picture is stunning, my favourite for both so far, just amazing David, really.
Thank you so much. I was soo excited when I took the photo yesterday, so I’m glad I matched it well:)
Beautiful – very positive and affirming 🙂
Love the composition of the photograph too.
Yes. I really wanted a positive piece that matched that photo:))
Your photo was excellent and your poem was outstanding. How amazing.Thank you for such an awakening this a.m.
I was sooo happy when I got that photo. :)). I’m glad I was able to match it with a nice poem:)
Oh! This one made me feel so swoopingly jolly. Fabulous shot too!
Yes!!! It was swooping and I adore the shot too!!!