The Blinking Second


Like a tearful aura from

a cloud’s gentle weeping…

the sun’s rays dart to and fro

looking for that one slender path….

to launch itself down to Earth

raining the land

with jewels so secret…

that they are

only seen

by those with

crystalline eyes…


David L. Whitman 05/19/2012 from under a sky so blue


30 thoughts on “The Blinking Second

  1. David, I like this post very much. The lyrics are very true and deep and the image is stunningly beautiful and right in your own words. Thank you more because you shared with us. A great weekend and much happiness! 🙂

  2. Here comes the sun!!!! Awe…a sweet poem. Love the heart of it. The tearful aura and gentle weeping got me. And I love the crystaline eyes part…. lovely thought. Beautiful. Sam the green fruit. Time for some guacamole! lol. Happy weekend. 🙂

  3. This piece is stunning, so many layers to the writing it’s beautiful, every word is like it’s own masterpiece inside a masterpiece. Well done. And the photo compliments so well. Love it!

  4. Oh! This one gave me a flicker of ray in my eyes and made me grin a huge grandiose smile. It played like a movie in my mind – my eyes even started darting looking for jewels. Yippie!

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