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Curling and winding,
greenly stretching out…
Tendrally tasting the alien air
and greedily sucking the minerals down…
Vibrations tease and particles jump..
a stomping foot…
a gentle step…
Reaching
and grasping…
clutching tight with
all the love in the world…
Soothing the struggles…
caressing the innocence..
And feeding deep
as the crimson sparkles
dance for all
to see…
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David L. Whitman 07/02/2012 nervous around the ivy…
CRIMSON! How I love that word… Rich, sensual… Gorgeous!
I do too…One of my favorites…If the poem has the words crimson or indigo, then i like it lol
this is christmas or something like it š
hahahaha…Crimsonmas is guess:))
coool
I like this!!!! Great poetry and photography David š
Thank you so much, Cindy:))))
I did love the crimson and the vibrations. Everything is molecules vibrating at different frequencies. I think Stephen Hawking would love this blog.
Thank you Barbara so much:)))
David your poem as deep as the colors!!! Cheers Nonoy Manga
Thank you,Nonoy!!
Wow! Are so many things taking place inside that lovely exterior? and a fabulous photo:)
:)))))) Thank you so much:)))) Enjoyed this one a lot
First I was mesmerized by the image… stunning David!!
And your poetic flare this evening outstanding ~
“Soothing the strugglesā¦
caressing the innocence..
And feeding deep
as the crimson sparkles”
can really see/feel this …. š
:))) thank you robyn…I liked the second half quite a bit:))))
Yes – thought this was a winner in every way!
Thank you thank you Robyn:))))
So gorgeous…metaphorically rich, colourful, vibrant, spiritual too…one of my favourites in your portfolio. Just beautiful.
Thank you so much:)) I like it a lot as well:)))
I could kind of relate to this part: clutching tight with all the love in the worldā¦ (he he)
Maybe I’m a vine!!! This was so wonderful. I love crimson…that word is such a beautiful word…anything with crimson…or indigo…or sun…or light….or….lol….
I think I use the words a lot!!! lol
Very beautiful words….and creative to match to the photo.
Sam of the green
A vine eh? that’s fine..Just don’t be THIS vine lolol
Oh What a beauty David…beautiful this one is so divine….am sharing
big hugs
Awe…thank you so much, Soma:)))))
Beautiful writing again David. Crimsotastic:)))))
haha. crimostastic! love it! thank you mateja
Follow the path, with little dance step no less. Great writing as always.
Thank you kim:). Salsa time:)
Tasting the alien air. SO love this image, especially since I am experiencing this of late with the watermelons in my garden. Those crazy things double in size overnight.
:))) Makes you wonder what they’re eating eh:)) Thank you:)))
Yeah…*shiver*