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Lines 3, 5, 8, 10, and 11 have to be read in an uptempo rhythm. It’s really more like a song:)
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If you please….
Come to me…
Light upon my finger….
And you’ll see…
Glorious sights up in the air…
Just like that star
Right over there….
Flavored like the sparkles
In your hair…
While I stay resting in my chair….
Fearful of even the slightest dare..
Afraid to sleep….
Afraid to share….
Afraid to touch….
Afraid to care….
All I do is sit and stare….
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David L. Whitman 09/29/2013 enjoying the rhythm
Thoughts from the Outdoors 
A poem that requires props. A metronome! Tick.. Tock.. Tick.. Tock.. Ticktockticktock….
Lol. Do you have one?
I have an app! Haha.
Of course you do lol
I need one. Because I ain’t got rhythm.
Well, at least you have one lol
I like it; it’s different than the rest. 🙂
It is an oddity for sure 🙂 thank you!
It is different and nice. Is it possible to upload a voice over..How’d it sound as a song?
I’ll see what I can do! Thank you Padmini
Wow I really like this one its so different than the others. I had so much fun reading it, counting the lines and trying to catch the rhythm. I’m not sure who caught who… Lol
Read it over and over again.
Brilliant David!!!!!
Thank you Mateja. I’ll work on getting it up with sound.
Can’t wait for that. Finally I will hear if I caught the rhythm or I failed 😉
I’ll get it to you
Thank you!!!! i’m looking forward to get it
Rhythm with a beat . . . . sounds lonely at the end.
It is, but loneliness is just a part of life
Sigh……I know.
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