An Invitation....
Never let fear stop you from experiencing something truly good in life….
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come with me
to the pool…
leave the heat…
Enjoy the cool…
don’t be scared…
you’re not a fool…
If you dive…
bluely jeweled…
yes it’s wild…
that’s the rule…
Like some tigers
In the zool…
But that’s okay…
feelings dual…
When with me,
at the pool…
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(Feelings dual is my way of saying mixed emotions…dual meaning two…so for once it’s not a typo for “duel” lol)
David L. Whitman 04/22/2012 from under a sky so blue…
Thoughts from the Outdoors 
Ironic how sometimes fear keeps us safe but other times keeps us from something truly good.
I agree…I guess there is a fine line to realizing if you’re scared or smart…
If you dive…
bluely jeweled…
yes it’s wild…
that’s the rule..
Awwwwwwwe I love this part
:)))) I like it too, thank you:)
Very vivid…I wish I could dive in without thinking 😉
Its really inviting:))). Thank you
A lovely light verse, but with a deepness too 🙂
:)))) thank you so much….
Delicate and inviting 😉 Very nice poem and picture
Thank you. I was definitely going for that feel…:)
After reading this I’d feel safer going for that dip in the pool!
Love the rhyming and understood your intention with “dual” 🙂 Nice!
I’m so glad:). I wrote that because someone asked me if that was a typo this morn anddd we all know I do that a lot:). Happy you liked it Robyn and golden threads looks so nice on your site:)
Sound like fun in the pool. 🙂 Real upbeat poem sounds good, happy.
Yes it was:)). Lovely place:). I’m happy you liked it
That is a good way of using duel. Like the poem it sounds frisky.
Frisky is a good way to describe it:) Thank you for the nice comment:)
Very refreshing David. Thanks for sharing Nonoy Manga
Thank you for stopping by:)
oh my, almost skip this again! yeah i also liked that jewel line… enticing waters and alluring invite, what a very nice combination there david 😉
Awe…thank you, Jymiely…IIt definitely was a jewel of a place
your welcome.you know how i thirst for such places 😉
I know you do:)
Really enjoy the flow with this one. I needed to ponder on such thoughts today!
Afternoon pondering is quite a good endeavor:)
playful.
very much so:))))